5/25/10 – lackawanna windmills (a 6.8.6 haiku)

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I crest around that turn
as the bikepath jambs the river –
distant windmills tai chi
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3 responses to “5/25/10 – lackawanna windmills (a 6.8.6 haiku)

  1. Very nice view and haiku …would love to take that ride.;-)

  2. I love the idea in the last line, and I love the name ‘Lackawanna’. Is it Native American?

    http://thelaughinghousewife.wordpress.com

  3. “Distant windmills tai chi.” OH MY GOD. That is one of the best haiku lines I’ve read in a long time.

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