6/2/10 – a 686 haiku

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dash the rain down on us
under clouds under roofs under
gray grinning summer night
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One response to “6/2/10 – a 686 haiku

  1. Oh I do love the feel of this poem..so refreshing for me…bring back images of spring rains..thanks for that!

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