6/4/10 – a 686 haiku

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across the whole long day
the clouds held back the rain held back
the curtain then let go
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2 responses to “6/4/10 – a 686 haiku

  1. Oh, I like this so much. And the other recent haiku of yours I’ve read — you have such a personal style. It can be so hard to break away from the typical haiku pattern/style. Keep it up!

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