7/14/10 – poem, 686 haiku

Another 6-8-6 syllable poem, but maybe not spiritually a true haiku.
+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
was it a betrayal
no – it was the snapping away
of betrayal of truth
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2 responses to “7/14/10 – poem, 686 haiku

  1. Quite an interesting twist on the word in the poem.

  2. Ooohh… harshly truthful!
    But truth is often harsh…isn’t it?
    And so is betrayal…

    Just curious… where is my Scheherazade? Yea, I just said “my”.. I was kinda used to reading them now.. I thought I get to read 1 a day… am waiting!!!
    Hope you get your writing mood back soon!!!

    Take care, and have a great week!

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