9/27/10 – poem, it goes underground

It goes underground
the stream the river
the rivulet the tricklet
the rocks worn smooth
then the smooth beyond smooth
the wearing the worn
weary ages transpose
expose the deeply
Furrow the brow


3 responses to “9/27/10 – poem, it goes underground

  1. Brought images of getting older and the changes it brings to mind.

  2. Great wordplay …I agree with Charles…loved the read my friend. Hope you’re doing well ?

  3. I also agree with the wordplay. Kudos!

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