10/5/10 – poem

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this the first
the meeting after
waiting maybe
then the second
taking me in
letting me go
leading you on
then me you left
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5 responses to “10/5/10 – poem

  1. An interesting progression in the relationship…I liked how to presented this.

  2. Did she come back?

  3. I am wondering too ?? Hugs x

  4. No, she never came back. Don’t know where she went, never heard from her again. Really.

  5. This is one of the more intelligent break-up poems that I have seen.

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