10/8/10 – poem

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faces like knotted maple
two tiny burmese women
serious intense then
suddenly smiling
stop in front of my house
the wind lilts
their high voices
away from me
heads wag
hands snap
then they walk on
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3 responses to “10/8/10 – poem

  1. Ah…I could envision this scene with the words you used….made me smile as I did.

  2. I could picture the scene too…hope you’re enjoying your weekend Lawrence ox

  3. I agree with the first two people who commented.

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