11/7/10 – poem

the water takes the coins
tension, tension
another and another
it will, eventually, spill

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3 responses to “11/7/10 – poem

  1. Took me a minute to process this one…liked it.;-)

  2. Nice poem!

  3. Niiiice! Awesome analogy, L!! Our minds can take only so much.. after that, it’s puke time!! (gross)..
    Oh boy…it feel great to be back here, after what seems like centuries!!!

    How have you been, my friend? Hope all is well with you..

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